托福写作：转折应该如何表达?

2017.10.19 来源: 互联网大字

托福写作的备考，无非是学习更多的表达方式，使文章更具有逻辑性。今天小编带你看：托福写作转折表达方法。

托福写作：转折应该如何表达?

托福*立作文内容充实逻辑性好、语法准确是拿到高分的重要因素。在限时考试中过于关注语言，提分效果可能还不如前两点。在非限时写作中，磨炼自己的语言基本功显得更有长远意义一些。本文以*为常见的转折词“but”为例，浅谈写转折句子的一些句子改进思路考，抛砖引玉。

1. 类似于“很多时候there be句型是没有必要的”，考虑是否but可以直接去掉?

试比较

She used to be indifferent to the outside world, but an interloper changed her.

Her indifference to the outside world was changed by an interloper.

2. 可否把but后面的句子改为短小的插入语等成分来体现转折?

试比较

Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novelsand literature ****yses, but she hardly succeeded in any of these endeavors at the very beginning.

Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novels and literature ****yses—all with little initial success.

3. 可否把but 后面部分改为更紧凑的从句?

试比较

It was meant to be a brief parting, but it turned into a long, lingering one.

What was meant to be a brief parting turned into a long, lingering one.

第二句读起来更加集中、紧凑，并且去掉了"It was, but it…”等鸡肋部分。

4. 积累多一些可能的but替换，比如：however/nonetheless/ nevertheless/ yet/ whereas/ while等，常常也能带来新思路。

试比较

Once arriving home, she starts to review all the notes, not necessarily because the teacher requires her to do so,but because she encourages herself to study hard.

Once arriving home,she starts to review all the notes, as much from the requirement of the teacher,as from herself-encouragement.

总结

对于but这一*为常见的转折，我们可以从“是否可以直接去掉?是否可以改为插入语等句子成分?是否可以改为更为紧凑的从句?是否有其他替换表达?”这个方面进行思考。

但应该指出，应该建立在“自己有把握判断原句与改进后句子的风格与质量”的基础上进行。有时候，不一定改的就比原句更好，短的不一定就更简洁。

托福写作：转折应该如何表达?相信你已经从以上的内容中找到了问题的答案。

投稿作者：孤芳不自赏46

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